This is the script we have to use when filming our narrative film, we have to find a good location which matches the script and also think about what the characters will be like when they are reading the lines from the script.
Your blog is still a little descriptive; you need to aim to be a little more analytical (evaluate and discuss the situations you are exploring). You should make sure that everything you post is contextualised (so, for example, some sort of analysis of the script or a discussion of how you might shoot it would be appropriate here). You might also want to, for example, include scans of the storyboards. Try to make your posts a little different from the other members of your group (unless you want to create a group blog as well as a personal one)
Your blog is still a little descriptive; you need to aim to be a little more analytical (evaluate and discuss the situations you are exploring). You should make sure that everything you post is contextualised (so, for example, some sort of analysis of the script or a discussion of how you might shoot it would be appropriate here). You might also want to, for example, include scans of the storyboards. Try to make your posts a little different from the other members of your group (unless you want to create a group blog as well as a personal one)
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