Rough Cut

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Our rough cut can be found on Ellie's blog. At the moment on our rough cut we havent included music or titles and we need to re-shoot our last bit of the opening as their is a few continuity errors and the speaking needs to be completed. We will re-shoot adding extra shots and a better script as all of us aren't happy with it, more shots of ellie turning up to the house will make the opening flow more as now we only see Ellie in the car and then suddenly walking up the stairs. We need to also add our institution and logo at the beginning to make seem more proffessional but they are the last pieces we will be doing as we need to focus on re-shooting, music and titles. Once we have included all of these hopefully it will flow more and we will have a much better outcome.